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Take me with you
Please, take me with you
Turning into
What I feel, too
Threading me through
Dying brand new
Living through you
Begging you
To take me with you
Take me with you

Only then
Through endless sin
Will innocent hearts unwind
Feeling whole
When cleansed of soul
Flaws evolving hearts, divine

Ruining you

Ruining You
Alexander Gioeli © 2009
:iconalexandersteele:

Author's Comments

Finally, exactly what I was looking for. That song can now be completed.

Thank you, Rabies.

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:iconthe-depth-of-love:
rabies??? wtf?

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"If I lived till I was 102, I just don't think I'll ever get over you.."
:iconartfreak10192:
I'm also really excited to hear this put together. The NIN influence shows, but in a really good original kinda way. :)
:iconthegypsy-v1:
Nice. Some good non-metric structure in there.

And if you want to know what I mean by that, try reading it backwards - you still have a decent poem.

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~The Gypsy (v1)

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